Sparrow's Retreat

[Napalm]

Sparrow, I have to say this looks like a real nice map.

The only thing I would suggest is to watch out for any type of whole in the middle of the area of play. Typically this will cause inconsistent play if it's a scrum game. sudden elevation drops in the terrain like that will provide a "jerky" driving experience and will also mess with the health of the scrum. All too often it looks great on the map, but when you get to playing it your just chasing scrum because it re-spawns due to holes in the terrain, or floor height.

My suggestion is if you want to include water objects to dress up your maps you should try to keep them in viewing distance, but place them outside of the playing area. This way they will add to the playing experience, but will not interfere with the playability.

Just food-for-thought

[Dazzle]

Now there is some advice from a real mod master............

And this map I must say is similar to the Nap style.

[Napalm]

Daz, your dripping blood banner is exceeding the maximum size.

Too funny